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  1. By not writing haiku in the 5-7-5 format. I’ve always believed that content dictates form which is why I’ve never written in any standard format like a sonnet. That doesn’t mean my poetry has no structure because it has but I always consider the shape of a poem after the words are down on the page.
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    Ami Mattison Reply:

    Jim, what I find interesting about your approach to writing poetry (“content dictates form”) is that it suggests you use content to limit the form rather than the other way around. And it seems precisely within that particular limitation that the poetic structure arises. But that’s just my perspective from my own experience of letting the poetic structure arise organically from the content–that process, to me, is an example of how creativity expands within limitations. Thanks for sharing!

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  2. Hi Ami–
    What I really like about this post (and probably all of yours) is that so much of what you say is true of both poetry and living (which reminds me of one of the reasons that writing is so important). Yes, limits provide opportunities. They require creativity. While they can feel confining and restrictive initially, I find that if I surrender to them I almost always end up with something I never would have without them, and the something is good. Thank you for the reminders this morning.
    Rita
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    Ami Mattison Reply:

    Thanks, Rita! When I was formulating the main point of this piece, I remembered a comment you made on an earlier blog article about how your students liked to muck around with their art with no real goals, schedules, or objectives (i.e. limits) and actually failed to produce very much.

    Creativity is limitless, in my opinion. We, however, are not.

    Life and living are like that too–limitless–and yet we have only so much time and energy here. It’s like, when we make-do with what we CAN do (within those limits), “surrender” to the limitations (as you said), and try to love ourselves and our efforts, then life just sort of opens up all glistening and throat-achingly beautiful. You know?

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    Rita Reply:

    Yeah, I know. (Didn’t see this until just today for some reason. Hope all is well. Or at least, enough is well.)

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  3. Ami

    Never tried haiku
    I thought it out of my reach
    But you snuffed the fear.

    hehehe. I’m not a poet, and I know it. But I still liked the post. I agree that creative boundaries and limitations can actually push artists of all stripes to produce valuable works, consider the sonnet/iambic pentameter that ‘limited’ Shakespeare and others, symphonic/classical music form/rules, various historic painting ‘rules’/styles, etc.
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    Ami Mattison Reply:

    She’s a poet and doesn’t know it! I agree. History and culture are rich with examples of how rules/forms/styles/traditions, etc. have been the “limitations” through which some of the greatest art has been made. Thanks, Amy!

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    Ami Mattison Reply:

    Ami, can you flippin’ believe I misspelled “OUR” name?! Oy. Long day!

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  4. Your usual very good post, Ami.

    I recently tried my hand at gogyohka, which can also be a tanka. The former is, at its simplest, verse in 5 lines, with the third line functioning both as the end for the two lines preceding and the beginning for the two lines following.

    Haiku has characteristics that most writers in English don’t achieve, simply because of the way English works. Still, I agree with you that trying to write in the form or any other is a disciplined practice that can benefit poetry writing.
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    Ami Mattison Reply:

    Thanks, Maureen! How was your experience with gogyohka? That’s one form (among many) I haven’t tried. I’ll admit that I’m not very practiced in using traditional poetic forms, but I’m constantly intrigued by how writing poetry (for me) is constantly figuring out what I can and can’t do with language. It’s like I’m always pushing up against limits and trying to figure out how to work within or around them, which for me is where creativity (and perhaps ingenuity) arises.

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